Comments for News from a Mobile Journalist http://rcieri.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 29 Jul 2009 00:38:03 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Justice on Postcards: PostSecret-inspired student project helps sexual assault victims heal by pretty smart http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2009/05/04/justice-on-postcards-postsecret-inspired-student-project-helps-sexual-assault-victims-heal/#comment-101 pretty smart Wed, 29 Jul 2009 00:38:03 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=414#comment-101 This was my exact experience -- AT ELON. I'm class of 2000. I'm sorry this happened to you too. Maybe if I did something in 1996, you wouldn't have had this experience. This was my exact experience — AT ELON. I’m class of 2000. I’m sorry this happened to you too. Maybe if I did something in 1996, you wouldn’t have had this experience.

]]> Comment on Elon and Burlington residents await Obama’s inaugural address by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/12/11/elon-and-burlington-residents-await-obamas-inaugural-address/#comment-82 Janna Thu, 11 Dec 2008 18:44:36 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=377#comment-82 I wonder why YouTube removed a couple of your video clips for a "terms of use violation"... ??? I wonder why YouTube removed a couple of your video clips for a “terms of use violation”… ???

]]> Comment on African-American and multicultural programs to hold Kwanzaa celebration by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/12/03/african-american-and-multicultural-programs-to-hold-kwanzaa-celebration/#comment-81 Janna Wed, 10 Dec 2008 18:39:05 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=366#comment-81 It's good to see you continuing to post content. Keep building on your site even long after our class is completed. You have a great portfolio here, and it is of such a quality that it is benefiting the common good - you are informing the world with your work, not just the people in our community. It’s good to see you continuing to post content. Keep building on your site even long after our class is completed. You have a great portfolio here, and it is of such a quality that it is benefiting the common good – you are informing the world with your work, not just the people in our community.

]]> Comment on Spilling the Juice: JuicyCampus leaves online reputations in question by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/12/01/spilling-the-juice-juicycampus-leaves-online-reputations-in-question/#comment-80 Janna Wed, 10 Dec 2008 18:36:42 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=354#comment-80 You did a good job on this from start to finish. You presented the concept well, had an excellent initial report on progress, completed a thorough first draft and adjusted to make the final piece a professional-level article. Textbook example of getting things done the right way! You did a good job on this from start to finish. You presented the concept well, had an excellent initial report on progress, completed a thorough first draft and adjusted to make the final piece a professional-level article. Textbook example of getting things done the right way!

]]> Comment on Elon’s Phoenix 14 News to go live with seven-hour election coverage by David Douglas http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/04/elon%e2%80%99s-phoenix-14-news-to-go-live-with-seven-hour-election-coverage/#comment-72 David Douglas Thu, 06 Nov 2008 18:28:09 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=302#comment-72 So just when you think the internet is for young folks, my mother found your blog and sent it to me. I was the News Director for Phoenix14News in 2004 when we did similar coverage of that election and really enjoyed reading and watching what you've put together here. Nice work! So just when you think the internet is for young folks, my mother found your blog and sent it to me. I was the News Director for Phoenix14News in 2004 when we did similar coverage of that election and really enjoyed reading and watching what you’ve put together here. Nice work!

]]> Comment on Elon’s Phoenix 14 News to go live with seven-hour election coverage by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/04/elon%e2%80%99s-phoenix-14-news-to-go-live-with-seven-hour-election-coverage/#comment-70 Janna Wed, 05 Nov 2008 15:05:44 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=302#comment-70 Rachel, when I take a look at the work you have done over the past few weeks I have to say that you are a candidate for MVP out of a class of excellent reporting students. Take pride in the work you have been doing, and understand the amount you have learned in the process of kicking it in and doing the in-depth reporting and writing we can witness on these pages. Rachel, when I take a look at the work you have done over the past few weeks I have to say that you are a candidate for MVP out of a class of excellent reporting students. Take pride in the work you have been doing, and understand the amount you have learned in the process of kicking it in and doing the in-depth reporting and writing we can witness on these pages.

]]> Comment on The Abridged Math Tools for Journalists: Wickham’s Briefing (Part 1) by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/03/the-abridged-math-tools-for-journalists-wickhams-briefing/#comment-69 Janna Wed, 05 Nov 2008 15:04:47 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=299#comment-69 Wow, Rachel. Amazing look at the use of numbers! I KNOW you gained insights you can use to be a better reporter when you processed this information so thoroughly. You did yourself a big favor by putting so much effort into this. Wow, Rachel. Amazing look at the use of numbers! I KNOW you gained insights you can use to be a better reporter when you processed this information so thoroughly. You did yourself a big favor by putting so much effort into this.

]]> Comment on Elon’s Phoenix 14 News to go live with seven-hour election coverage by Paul Parsons http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/04/elon%e2%80%99s-phoenix-14-news-to-go-live-with-seven-hour-election-coverage/#comment-68 Paul Parsons Wed, 05 Nov 2008 12:12:27 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=302#comment-68 Rachel, I enjoyed reading about how Phoenix14News prepared for its epic election coverage. Thanks! Rachel, I enjoyed reading about how Phoenix14News prepared for its epic election coverage. Thanks!

]]> Comment on Elon’s Phoenix 14 News to go live with seven-hour election coverage by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/04/elon%e2%80%99s-phoenix-14-news-to-go-live-with-seven-hour-election-coverage/#comment-67 Janna Wed, 05 Nov 2008 03:37:23 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=302#comment-67 Nicely done, all the way around. Comprehensive reporting accomplished on multiple platforms at an excellent level! Brava! I also enjoyed reading it on Pendulum Online, but I like your layout here better. Nicely done, all the way around. Comprehensive reporting accomplished on multiple platforms at an excellent level! Brava!

I also enjoyed reading it on Pendulum Online, but I like your layout here better.

]]> Comment on Jack Smith, Elon’s costume designer: As colorful as the clothes he makes by Janna http://rcieri.wordpress.com/2008/11/01/as-colorful-as-the-clothes-he-makes-elons-costume-designer-jack-smith-takes-theater-to-the-next-level/#comment-65 Janna Sat, 01 Nov 2008 22:20:40 +0000 http://rcieri.wordpress.com/?p=285#comment-65 This is an outstanding example of a professional headline, lead, and storytelling with specific details. In a perfect world, it would have been more ideal if the supporting quotes (from students, friends, etc.) would have been woven in rather than left to the end. An ideal package would begin with Jack and end with Jack. And, finally, the one thing I think most important that is missing is his sketches or perhaps some photos of people wearing the clothes he has designed! This is an outstanding example of a professional headline, lead, and storytelling with specific details. In a perfect world, it would have been more ideal if the supporting quotes (from students, friends, etc.) would have been woven in rather than left to the end. An ideal package would begin with Jack and end with Jack. And, finally, the one thing I think most important that is missing is his sketches or perhaps some photos of people wearing the clothes he has designed!

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